Here’s a poem I wrote in September of 1996, so it’s pretty old. When I wrote it, I was still doing practice writing and writing poetry, which I stuffed into a folder.
So, here it is, public for the first time. Let me know what you think. The title is pretty weak, but that’s what I chose back then so I’ll keep it.
Autumn
I let go,
look back,
Stutter.
Dark days
weaken us.
My brothers
then,
Sisters
leave you nude
through cold months.
Next year
your children dress you
Again.
I recall now as I typed it why I wrote it the way I did: the flow of the words and the way I set them on the page is to mimic the journey of a leaf from its perch on a high branch, falling to the ground, buffeted by the resistance of the air, a gentle breeze.
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